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Love? by ~XXXEmo-wolfXXX:iconXXXEmo-wolfXXX:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Blood you gave up and down my arm
never caring about all the harm
it caused me emotionally, i guess i'm a mess
i can't stop loving you just let my heart rest

tears streaming down my face as you elipse me
thinking i'll be okay but just look and see
in my heart it's all torn apart from the tears you caused me right from the start
i guess it's hard when i can't stop loving you
watching you walk past like you always do

into the darkness you pushed me pushed me so deep  
all i want is to eternally sleep
in the darkness i cannot escape
as of your love now in my heart's a gape
that's torn so deep deep as you puished me into dark
i guess i should have known right from the start

life and love is just one big game
my  love for you is killing me
i guess like chooses whos to blame
i bleed die and live for you
you'll never feel the same
love hurts but i can't stop loving you...

<3 I hope you know i still love you
©2009 ~XXXEmo-wolfXXX
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Author's Comments

Bleugh ^^ i guess this is how i feel at the moment about someone..


hope it's okay i dunno i don't usually write poetry
let's hope it's okay

i guess this someone has no idea how i feel... that's why i wrote this hehe ^^

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:iconalexsatriani:
Mood: Dumbfounded ~AlexSatriani Apr 6, 2009, 7:38:50 AM
:wow: wow Kate, you can write , see i told you , you don't anything to learn from , you need you heart to express it to the out world, which i almost do v_v
Like your words but am feeling sad about your feeling v_v

hope you will get better :hug: :kiss:

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~XXXEmo-wolfXXX Apr 6, 2009, 8:19:14 AM
Hehhe <3 Aww thankoo so much **blushness xDDDD
heh i guess this just came from my heart,
aww, thankoo :hug:
but i guess thats how i'm feeling at the moment n all hehe


i hope you start feeling better too :kiss:

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:heart: ~CHARLEYS62 so much sweety <3
:heart: =xxKeiko-Toxicityxx so much sis <3

Hey look it's Nanerpus!
hey kids you can call me Nanerpus Nanerpus Nanerpus and I Love pancakes <3

The owls in your Gravy! cos you're King of the beavers!
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~AlexSatriani Apr 6, 2009, 1:58:02 PM
no problems dear ;)

i will never fell better , except of seeing my little rainbow v_v

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~Kesai-Wolf Apr 7, 2009, 3:10:57 AM
WOW!!!! Katie this is amazing.
Your so good at writing poetry, were both on the same track of love at the moment babe, we both have strong feelings about someone and are not sure if they know or not.
We will stick thru this until its ended.
I will stand by u wen u need me most.
Together we will face the difficulty of love.

LOL
BIG IT UP 4 DA SINGLE LADIEZZZZZZ! ! ! !

Once again this is brill, I loves it
Hope u feel better soon bbe

Chelsea
XxX
i love ya bbe x

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I STOOD ON ~loyp'S POMBEAR!!!
SORRY ~loyp
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~XXXEmo-wolfXXX Apr 7, 2009, 6:39:17 AM
Aww >3< Thankoo so much,
xDD i'm not verygood, you are tho ^^
Yeah ^^ in the same boat eh xD
Aww thankoo, i will stick by you too when you need someone :3
yus yus and it is very diffucult Dx

LOl Yus 8D xDD

Thankoo so much ^^
You Too x

Love ysah to hon o3o x

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:heart: ~CHARLEYS62 so much sweety <3
:heart: =xxKeiko-Toxicityxx so much sis <3

Hey look it's Nanerpus!
hey kids you can call me Nanerpus Nanerpus Nanerpus and I Love pancakes <3

The owls in your Gravy! cos you're King of the beavers!
:iconxxxemo-wolfxxx:
~XXXEmo-wolfXXX Apr 7, 2009, 6:40:25 AM
hehe, ^^ ;p
aww, >< if seeing your little rainbow makes you feel any better i hope you see her lots ^^

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:heart: ~CHARLEYS62 so much sweety <3
:heart: =xxKeiko-Toxicityxx so much sis <3

Hey look it's Nanerpus!
hey kids you can call me Nanerpus Nanerpus Nanerpus and I Love pancakes <3

The owls in your Gravy! cos you're King of the beavers!
:iconalexsatriani:
~AlexSatriani Apr 7, 2009, 6:50:14 AM
if she doesn't want to see me how can that make me better v_v


eh, whatever

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~Kesai-Wolf Apr 8, 2009, 11:22:51 AM
Im no gd at poetry
Im sure everything will work out in the long run : )

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I STOOD ON ~loyp'S POMBEAR!!!
SORRY ~loyp
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~XXXEmo-wolfXXX Apr 8, 2009, 11:26:41 AM
Yu Is awesome at it 8D
hehe hopefully.....

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:heart: ~CHARLEYS62 so much sweety <3
:heart: =xxKeiko-Toxicityxx so much sis <3

Hey look it's Nanerpus!
hey kids you can call me Nanerpus Nanerpus Nanerpus and I Love pancakes <3

The owls in your Gravy! cos you're King of the beavers!
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